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BS2 and water3 by teddybearcholla BS2 and water3 by teddybearcholla
Not quite sure I'm done with it., that's why the no sense title! :lol:
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My first critique ever. Please tell me what you think ^^;.
First, I love how you did the sky. You did it with Artrage right? You have to teach me someday how to do it.
My first thought is "man, this is good!" But when I saw it clearly, I noticed some of the sand is in the water? Maybe you tried it to look like the water moves the sand? No a bad idea at all, but it looks a little bit strange.
It is a very good piece, I only think sand could improve, that's not easy. So congrats!
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Ton-K300 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
To be critical, the water reminds me of a series of splahes as opposed to waves 'lapping' up against a beach and I don't get any depth via the sand. I really do like the overall effect though colour wise! Nice work Barb! ;)
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teddybearcholla Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you dear Antony!! :heart: You are correct on both, and yes I do see it that way...thinking now even if splashes, they need something to splash on like a rock or something. Perhaps, I will continue on with it this winter and see if I can make it better!! Thank you so much for your help!! :hug: :D
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Ton-K300 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
It's a great WIP! Looking forward to seeing more..:hug:
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teddybearcholla Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Antony! :D :hug:
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Ton-K300 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
You're very welcome Barb! ;):hug:
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skyzyk Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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teddybearcholla Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Gary! :hug:
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skyzyk Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anyime Angel :wave:
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adni18 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012
Excellent work! :thumbsup:
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teddybearcholla Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!! :heart:
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